Could any native English speaker please correct grammar mistake? I need to write an essay in English?





I don't get frustrated in Japan because I'm able to tell people how I feel but since I said whatever I wanted to say, I had no social life and had quit 7 jobs in the first six months in Japan. but now, I have understood it is not because of the person I worked with but because of the Japanese culture and I am not taking thinsgs too serious anymore.I myself am mixed and also I have some adopted family. I'm German and grew up in europe but look like Japanese so maybe I realize too many things I don't need to.First, the Japanese just cannot stop seeing difference between race. It's not about the Japanese people but the Japanese culture.To japanese people, my brother is my Europan white brother and my friends are my german friends. But to me, they are just my friends and my brother.Second, the Japanese have favourite race.My brother or my friends are admired and worshipped and treated like god. I also know that the Japanese treat non whites or non Japanese like ****.This made me quit 7 jobs but then i have realized that it doesn't depend on the personality of the people. It's not the people but the Japanese culture. The culture makes the people admire and worship white race.My friends are just my friends to me. My brother is just my brother to me. But not like that in Japanese culture. People here say that they like language and other culture, and they learn english and want to make European friends and become international person. I'm alot admired because I sound like very international person. But thats too fake to me. Japanese culture will never ever stop seeing difference between me, my brother and my friends.



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2 Responses to “Could any native English speaker please correct grammar mistake? I need to write an essay in English?”

  1. parastyle says:

    just hold on, i’ll correct it now.EDIT:I understand that the reason I quit seven jobs, in the first six months, and had no social life in Japan was not because of the people I worked with but because of the Japanese culture.I myself am mixed and even live with my family who adopted me. I’m German and grew up in Europe, but look Japanese, so perhaps I realize too many things I don’t need to.First, the Japanese cannot eliminate the differences between each race. Specifically, it’s not about the Japanese people but the Japanese culture.To Japanese people, my brother is my ‘European white brother’ and my friends are my ‘German friends’. But to me, they are just my friends and he is just my brother.Secondly, the Japanese favour a particular race.My brother or my friends are admired, worshipped and treated like God. I also know that the Japanese think they are the superior race, by treating non-whites or people who aren’t Japanese inappropriately. This made me quit seven jobs, and yet I have realized that it doesn’t depend on the personality of people. It’s not the Japanese people but the Japanese culture. The culture makes the people admire and worship the white race.My friends are just my friends to me. My brother is just my brother to me. But the Japanese culture isn’t so simple. People here say that they like different languages and different cultures; they learn English and want to make European friends and become international people. I’m admired a lot by them, because I seem like a very well-cultured person. To me, that seems too fake. It seems as if the Japanese culture won’t ever stop seeing differences between me, my brother and my friends. I’m not too sure what you’re writing your essay on.Could you please tell me, I may be able to correct more mistakes for you..

  2. unjustify says:

    I do not get frustrated when speaking Japaneses because I am able to tell people how I feel, but because I said whatever I wanted to say, I had no social life and quit seven jobs in the first six months while there. Now, though, I understand it is not the fault of the person I worked with but that of the Japanese culture, and I am not taking things too seriously anymore.I am biracial and also have some adopted family. I’m German and grew up in europe but look Japanese, so maybe I know too many things I do not need to.First, the Japanese only see difference between the races. It is not about the Japanese people but the Japanese culture.To Japanese people, my brother is my Europan white brother and my friends are my German friends, but, to me, they are just my friends and my brother.Second, the Japanese have favor one race over another.My brother or my friends are admired and worshipped and treated like God. I also know that the Japanese treat non-whites or non-Japanese like ****.At first, this made me quit seven jobs but I since have realized that it does not depend on the personality of the people. It’s not the people but the Japanese culture. The culture makes the people admire and worship the white race.My friends are just my friends to me; my brother is just my brother to me. But it is not like that in Japanese culture. People here say that they like languages and other cultures learn English, want to make European friends and become more cultured. I am admired because I sound like very cultured person. But that is too fake to me. Japanese culture will never ever stop seeing difference between me, my brother, and my friends.Grammatical notes: Spell all numbers zero-ten.Don’t say “don’t” in an essay…rather say “do not” besides that it was ok. I hope you ace your essay!