I NEED HELP ASAP! I?





Can someone please revise this essay....TEN POINTS TO WHOEVER DOES THE BEST Many people encounter someone in their lives that have done something great or meaningful. Someone like the mythical character Hercules or maybe someone less known like a close relative that you look up to. I myself have a couple of people that I look up to but, only one has that title as a hero. Believe it or not—it’s Batman (childhood hero of course). The reason why Batman is my hero is because the way he uses his wits, martial arts techniques, and how he balances the life of his alter ego can apply to my everyday life. Batman is a smart person because he uses bravery and cunning to outsmart his enemies. He is always three steps ahead of them and he always seems to come out on top. When Batman is in the heat of danger he can always rely on his mind to get him out of trouble. He fools his opponents and manipulates to make them think they have the upper hand when in actuality they don’t. Another heroic characteristic Batman has is his knowledge of his superior martial arts techniques. All Batman has to do is give a few volleys of punches, kicks, and grapples to fight against a bad ratio not in his favor. He doesn’t rely on superpowers to have an advantage over the enemy instead he mostly uses his body to overcome them. One amazing thing I love about Batman is the way he separates himself from Bruce Wayne and the Dark Knight. This appears to be a somewhat on-going battle with him (especially when a lady is involved) and he seems to overcome that. To the city of Gotham he’s a multi-billionaire that is a humanitarian to the people. Then when night falls he turns into "The Bat" and fulfills his role as a humanitarian in the form of a vigilante. Now I don’t look at Batman and say these things because he’s a superhero but, I believe his qualities can be used in everyday life. I don’t think he’s a hero because of his alter-ego, his mind, or his martial arts moves. He’s my hero because those characteristics can apply to me. He uses them as a "fall-back" plan just in case one or the other fails. I don’t think I can apply this to my life now but, when I get older it will affect me. For example, if I get a sports scholarship to a well-known college and I injured myself my career is over. If I get my education and do well in school I will have a plan B to look back on. This why Batman is my hero because he shows me how to plan ahead and have a plan B or maybe even a plan C.



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  1. bronzy says:

    please read it carefully i dont khow how old you are and in which grade but i tired to give you some construction. if you are in higher levels you need quotes for your body paragraphs good luck…….In a life time, everyone encounters people who have done something great or meaningful. Someone like a mythical character, for example Hercules, or maybe someone less known like a close relative that one looks up to. There are a few people that I look up to myself, but only one has that title, Hero, with him. Believe it or not—my hero is Batman (childhood hero of course). Batman is my hero because of his wisdom, strength, and decipline.Batman is a smart person. Being brave(you are introducing something new herebravery) and cunning Batman outsmarts his enemies. He is always three steps ahead of them and he always seems to come out on top. When Batman is in the heat of danger, he can always rely on his mind to get him out of trouble. He fools and manipulates his opponents to make them think they have the upper hand when in reality they don’t. Batman is wise and this makes him a great hero for me.Another heroic characteristic of Batman’s is his phisical strength. Batman is particularly a great martial artist. All Batman has to do is to give a few volleys of punches, kicks, and grapples to fight against a bad ratio not in his favor. He doesn’t rely on superpowers to have an advantage over the enemy instead he mostly uses his body to overcome them. The presence of body besides the mind gives Batman another adventage over the other components in my list of heros.Finally, Batman amazes me when I see the way he can descipline himself. It is quite amazing how he can separate himself from Bruce Wayne and the Dark Knight. This appears to be a somewhat on-going battle with him, especially when a lady is involved, and he seems to overcome that. In the city of Gotham, he is (if this is a formal essay never use abbreviations) a multi-billionaire humanitarian. Then when night falls he turns into “The Bat”, and fulfills his role as a humanitarian in the form of a vigilante. (talk a little about the lady and how he manages to keep his bat life secret). Batman certainly proves to be desciplined, it makes him one of the greatest rule modles that a boy like me would look up to passionately.In short, I don’t look at Batman and say he is a great because he’s a superhero ,but(you have done it again the comma goes before the preposition) I believe his qualities can be used in everyday life. I don’t think he’s a hero because of his alter-ego, his mind, or his martial arts moves ( the most important thing in an essy: never ever introduce something newbecause then you have to prove it). He’s my hero because those he is wise, strong, and orgenized. These help him to have his “fall-back” plan just in case one or the other fails. I don’t think I can apply this to my life now ,but when I get older it will affect me. (you do not need examples in your conclusion) This why Batman is my hero because he shows me how to plan ahead and have a plan B or maybe even a plan