Please grade my SAT essay!?

Serious Comments ONLYPrompt- Technology promises to make our lives easier, freeing up for leisure pursuits. But the rapid pace of technology innovation and the split second processing capabilities of computers that can work virtually nonstop have made all of us feel rushed. We have adopted the relentless pace of the very machines that were supposed to simplify our lives, with result that, whether at work or play, people do not feel like their lives have changed for the better.Assignment- Do changes that make life easier not necessarily make them better? Plan and write an essay that develops your ideas logically. Support your opinion with specific evidence taken from your personal experience, your observations of others, or your reading.

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One Response to “Please grade my SAT essay!?”

  1. cracking says:

    I would give your essay a 6 or 7 out of 12You need to include more supports in the passage and not just information from one sourceThe structure of your essay is pretty solid though.hope this helps