Proof read my Spanish essay?

Will someone who is fluent in spanish and english please proof my essay? I don't care if it is bad or stupid I just need it to be grammatically correct for my spanish class. I am not completely done with it but this is some of it. It is a letter to "my host family in spain" Thanks!¡Hola! Me llamo Kelsey, y yo tengo quince anos. Tengo una carta redonda y tengo alto. Tengo ojos azul y pelo ondulado. Yo estoy simpático, inteligente, y tímido. Mi comidas favoritas es el pollo y la pizza! No me gusta las comidas pescado, espinaca, y chino. En mi rato libre, yo toco piano, monto my caballo, y nado. Me gusta las películas Breaking Dawn y Abduction porque me gusta Taylor Lautner. Me gusta las libras Anna and the French Kiss por Stephanie Perkins y The Last Song por Nicholas Sparks. Mi programas de televisión favoritas es Gossip Girl y The Walking Dead. Me gusta Michigan State y Green Bay Packer’s fútbol americano. ¿Qué le gusta hacer? ¿Cuál es tu deporte favorito? ¿Cómo es España?

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  1. asseble says:

    For being an American its a pretty good job. what i can tell is there just little details to correct btw i’m mexican… look this are some corrections “quince años” in the sentence “Tengo una carta redonda y tengo alto: in english the traslation would be “I have a round letter and i have tall” haha so I am a little confused about what you wanna say maybe i have a round head and i am tall? well for that here’s the translation “Tengo la cara redonda y estoy alta”Corrected frases: “Tengo ojos azules y pelo ondulado” “Yo soy simpátic@ (@ depends if you are a boy or girl sorry i can’t tell jeje if you are a girl end it with an a and boy o) inteligente y timid@” “No me gusta el pescado, la espicana ni la comida china” “yo toco el piano” “Me gustan las películas Breaking Dawn y Abduction porque Taylor Lautner está en ellas. “Me gustan los libros” “Mis programas de televisión favoritos son Gossip Girl y The Walking Dead” “Me gustan los equipos Michigan State y Greenbay Packer’s que son equipos de fútbol americano” “¿Qué te gusta hacer?I hope it helps i’m very confident the corrections im telling you are correct cause I speak 24/7 Spanish hahahha btw i loooveee Breaking Dawn, The Last Song book and Gossip Girl too! they are my obsession! and i’m 15 too hahaha good luck with your homework :)