Can someone offer me a critique on my essay?

Its an analysis of a film. Its about 1400 words long. I will send it via an email attachment or yahoo's messaging system but I won't post it here. I am not asking you to make edits or to spellcheck but rather to read it and give me an overall idea on what I need to improve. I will reward whoever does it with ten points. No need for any editting, but that would be nice.

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3 Responses to “Can someone offer me a critique on my essay?”

  1. Andoke says:

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  2. mismarriage says:

    I will!

  3. yaya says:

    Sure. What is the film?Let’s do this!